Kia ora Noah, I have not been to Brisbane but your detailed description of the theme parks helped me to imagine being there! Your slides are very well organised with ideas paragraphed. Your voice is clear and well-paced and a pleasure to listen to. What a lovely birthday- I am sure your family will return to Brisbane one day in the future.
Hi Noah What a cool speech I know you worked really hard on this and you knew what you wanted to say. You spoke very clearly and slow well done. Hopefully we do get to go again soon as we all love going to the Gold Coast we have so much fun. Keep up the good work buddy. Mum
Kia ora Noah, I have not been to Brisbane but your detailed description of the theme parks helped me to imagine being there! Your slides are very well organised with ideas paragraphed. Your voice is clear and well-paced and a pleasure to listen to. What a lovely birthday- I am sure your family will return to Brisbane one day in the future.
ReplyDeleteHi Noah
ReplyDeleteWhat a cool speech I know you worked really hard on this and you knew what you wanted to say. You spoke very clearly and slow well done.
Hopefully we do get to go again soon as we all love going to the Gold Coast we have so much fun.
Keep up the good work buddy.
Mum