This is such a creative way of doing your poem! I really like how you have used different colours as another way of thinking outside of the box! You have put so much effort and thought into this post! It’s amazing!
You have used some really good words to describe what it would feel like to be the first person to walk on the moon! It would absolutely feel incredible, great, and nobel! I also like how you included Neil’s famous quote “One giant leap for mankind!”
What do you think you would be most excited about if you were the first person to walk on the moon? I think I would be excited to see what no gravity felt like!
You’ve done so well on this post! I’m excited to see the rest of yours!
Thank you for your nice comments I really like reading them it makes me happy. I would be excited about no gravity as well so I could do flips and kart wheels that would be so fun.
Hi Noah!
ReplyDeleteThis is such a creative way of doing your poem! I really like how you have used different colours as another way of thinking outside of the box! You have put so much effort and thought into this post! It’s amazing!
You have used some really good words to describe what it would feel like to be the first person to walk on the moon! It would absolutely feel incredible, great, and nobel! I also like how you included Neil’s famous quote “One giant leap for mankind!”
What do you think you would be most excited about if you were the first person to walk on the moon? I think I would be excited to see what no gravity felt like!
You’ve done so well on this post! I’m excited to see the rest of yours!
Matilda :)
Hi Matilda
ReplyDeleteThank you for your nice comments I really like reading them it makes me happy.
I would be excited about no gravity as well so I could do flips and kart wheels that would be so fun.
Noah:)
Hey Noah!
DeleteI'm glad my comments make you happy! You've been doing a really good job, you deserve to be encouraged! I hope you keep up the awesome posts! :)
I think that I would try do some flips too! I can't do them on earth so I would be interested to know if I would do them on the moon!
Matilda :)